I kinda prefer his old kit's strategy of resetsing cooldowns when damaged which can be fixed with your unqie to help his damage, and a chance to gain turn meter. I like your basic idea though I prefer his AoE to stay the same par from making the retubution 2 turns, mad rush seems fine though seems like something that could be tacked on to outrage. Love the leader though I think perhaps on top of killing an enemy whenever they lose foresight, this would keep tie pilot and ren in constant advantage making them deadly, stormtrooper almost always taunting and phasma and officer away in the shadows