@paradiseplanet What a detailed and carefully thought out political engine. I am blown away. This sub-culture as you describe it is very much in line with the type of global underworld culture I am trying to achieve in my neighborhood. I have already re-read this several times and, I hope you do not mind, made adjustments to some of my original plans moving forward. I am inspired by you. Thank You.
I find each of Lilith's offspring interesting and so diverse in nature. Their stories are certainly compelling (those that survive that is - poor Damon :'( - doomed to an eternity of bullying), however I am most engaged by Sosuke (wild one indeed) and Grimmjow (if these hint at inspiration from a certain manga series
I would really love to get better insight into them, especially baby Grimmjow - what a wonderful, power- hungry, hedonistic, and self-absorbed figure he would be - love it. If I am mistaken about the reference or if his name is the only legacy you plan for this little guy than I apologize, but I still find his backstory and his father's evil proclivities interesting and just plain old-fashioned fun).
Thank you so much for sharing. I am very excited to read future installments (batches).
