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10 years ago

The Suzu Clan (Amazon Challenge-Updated 2/6)

In the tenth generation of the Ikeda legacy, one of the many daughters had an idea for a book that featured herself as a powerful leader of a clan of women.

Her name was Suzu and here is her story.

Table of Contents
Introduction
Preview
Prologue I
Prologue II
Prologue III
Compound Tour
Chapter 1.1
Chapter 1.2
Chapter 1.3
Chapter 1.4
Chapter 1.5
Chapter 1.6
Chapter 1.7
Chapter 1.8
Chapter 1.9
Chapter 1.10
Chapter 1.11
Chapter 1.12
Chapter 1.13
Chapter 1.14
Chapter 1.15
Chapter 1.16
Chapter 1.17
Chapter 1.18
Chapter 1.19
Chapter 1.20
Secret Interlude...
Chapter 1.21
Chapter 1.22
Chapter 1.23
Chapter 1.24 (Suzu's Departure)
Chapter 2.1: Enji


This is based on the Amazon Challenge but I've stylized it to my likings because I'm a rebel! ;)
  • "MrsRacooney;c-16945312" wrote:
    Oh look what's there it's a chapter ghklghlkv MAN what a pleasant surprise! :love:
    Enji's indeed incredibly sweet, and as a rather timid person myself I totally feel him <3 I hope he'll find some people in the tribe with whom he can be frank and relaxed.
    Ha! I love the idea with all the attendants looking for work in the teahouse and that you call them attendants rather than slaves (and I know you've done that before, but this had to be mentioned yet). This chapter had an overall relaxed feeling, like a real light one to get into the story again and it worked so well! Sometimes it really pays out to take time in writing and the animate scenery topped it all off.
    LOL your trick with the beds is hilarious. Sneaky! ;)
    Be prepared, for now of course my curiosity aims at learning what will happen to Enji in the tribe :D


    You're so sweet, as always. <3 I'm so sorry I didn't log back into the forums to check for comments! I could have sworn I wrote back to you... Ah, I did in a PM, awesome! XD

    I've got to get back to my notes on what's to happen next with poor Enji. Perhaps that'll be my next project on my lunch breaks. :3