PertorTom
2 months agoRising Hotshot
DRey DC
Well done, CG. Well done. Raking in money at the expense of gameplay. Of course, your pockets will be full again now because a lot of people who want to be or stay at the top will buy the datacron w...
The point is: these DCs ruin the game. I won't explain it any further. Reread the original statement.
I do agree with your overall sentiment. It's shaped GAC in a horrible way (for where I am, anyway).
However, although chpminisolo is clearly trolling you, they have a point. Your topic sentence is "Raking in money at the expense of gameplay." It's not until you get to the end of paragraph 1, where you address the actual issue. "Till October, we'll be left with a ruined Grand Arena and even more ruined TWs. Very nice."
Focus on the actual issue, then give added information about it.
harvestmouse1 wrote:However, although chpminisolo is clearly trolling you, they have a point. Your topic sentence is "Raking in money at the expense of gameplay." It's not until you get to the end of paragraph 1, where you address the actual issue. "Till October, we'll be left with a ruined Grand Arena and even more ruined TWs. Very nice."
TIL getting clarification of an unclear sentence is trolling. Cheers