That was a very well written piece. You manage expertly to use just the right words, in the right order to build the tension. Well done, I shall eagerly read what comes next. I am greatly impressed.
Thank you! That's high praise coming from you and means a lot.
I’m rereading now and realizing I rushed it—I missed some punctuation, and a whole section was off, haha. (Fixed now! The part under her arm should make more sense.) Didn’t even realize I typed the same thing twice because I numbered it wrong in my notepad. Love when that happens, lol.
Still, I’m really happy you’re enjoying it, and when it’s all said and done, I just hope I can do this story justice.
